[DECLINED] Cod 4 freerunning montage | Xbox (OS)

[SoraJonny]

I thought I would attempt to get my montage on here as I have watched this channel for a while and the runs were frustrating to do heres my channel and the video

Channel: https://www.youtube.com/user/xJonnnnY

Video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JToCmO_cJC0

[Xpayne]

Great videos and Channel! But unfortunately, which we don't like say that, declined.

Reasons:

1) Intro from 0:00 to 0:14

Suggestion: completely cut this part away and add some nice transition in Sony Vegas.

2) Song. We hear this song so many times from you guys (Console Jumpers) now it's getting boring.

Suggestion: Just change.

3) Some errors like 0:47 to 0:48. Some clips are really brightness that sometimes eyes hurts.

Suggestion: Need to be cut. Add some color corrections.

4) If you too lazy to fix all this, allow me re-edit your video and we might Approve and Upload to CJ.