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my first jump map

Post by rB|Liam* » March 13th, 2011, 10:17 pm

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Hello everyone, here is my very first custom map for cod4. Tell me what you think and if you know anyways i can improve let me know. This map is very short but if people actually like it im going to delete the end and make it longer and hopefully better/harder :)
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Re: my first jump map

Post by BeZZo » March 13th, 2011, 11:06 pm

When you said short i thought you were kidding.
Map looks nice and interesting, just make it longer, A LOT longer.
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Re: my first jump map

Post by rB|Liam* » March 13th, 2011, 11:09 pm

BeZZo wrote:When you said short i thought you were kidding.
Map looks nice and interesting, just make it longer, A LOT longer.
yea im gunna, just wanted to see what people tought so far. i was expecting alot of hate tbh lol
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Re: my first jump map

Post by H0mie » March 14th, 2011, 12:07 pm

looks nice so far
if u need some help testing the map in order to make it better, harder, etc.
just contact meon xfire....i love to help ppl out and jump new maps :D
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Re: my first jump map

Post by Hoogie » March 14th, 2011, 3:50 pm

Insufficient lighting near the end. It's a average map. Good for your first try.
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Re: my first jump map

Post by rB|Liam* » March 14th, 2011, 8:14 pm

Hoogie wrote:Insufficient lighting near the end.
yea i know iv added more lights now, and now im just working on making it longer
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Re: my first jump map

Post by Shinryu » March 14th, 2011, 8:53 pm

The only thing I have to hate you for is not posting a download link. :wink:

regardless of length, it looks alright.
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Re: my first jump map

Post by rB|Liam* » March 14th, 2011, 10:30 pm

imgunna be busy so il get you one ny the weekend if you want? :)
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Re: my first jump map

Post by Lawless » March 14th, 2011, 11:56 pm

Nice map,
But all I can help you with is make it longer, brighter and try and find some origional tricks not just bounces and C strafes.
Overall its good for your first map, Good work.
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Re: my first jump map

Post by rB|Liam* » March 15th, 2011, 12:19 am

Lawless wrote:Nice map,
But all I can help you with is make it longer, brighter and try and find some origional tricks not just bounces and C strafes.
Overall its good for your first map, Good work.
im gunna make it brighter and stuff, and what do you mean by origional tricks? im basically making it up as i go along lol... iv just spent ages making it longer then radiant stopped responding and i forgot to save so i lost it all :(
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Re: my first jump map

Post by Hoogie » March 15th, 2011, 12:27 am

xrgz wrote:
Lawless wrote:Nice map,
But all I can help you with is make it longer, brighter and try and find some origional tricks not just bounces and C strafes.
Overall its good for your first map, Good work.
im gunna make it brighter and stuff, and what do you mean by origional tricks? im basically making it up as i go along lol... iv just spent ages making it longer then radiant stopped responding and i forgot to save so i lost it all :(
There's a auto save function in radiant which saves like every 10min. The file is in your Radiant folder and called something like autosave.
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Re: my first jump map

Post by I_IBouncEI_I » March 16th, 2011, 8:35 pm

Sick but will this map be possible with 125? coz i only get 125 :(
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Re: my first jump map

Post by rB|Liam* » March 17th, 2011, 10:43 am

I_IBouncEI_I wrote:Sick but will this map be possible with 125? coz i only get 125 :(
i only get 125 aswell so yea :)
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