My first poem. Don't laugh!

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My first poem. Don't laugh!

Post by Dekline0zero » November 1st, 2010, 4:17 pm

Today i was writing the poem during 15-20 minutes about us, the people who killing the nature and everything good in this world.

It's not a whole poem, i wrote only this. I'll continue, if you like it :)

"Who said that world is best,
no reasons for this phrase.
I'd use the things to make them good
but there's no the rest.
the rest is good, is nicest thing
but our time baddest.
The time is bad for me and you
to make the people best.
No more the nature no more the sky.
The people killed these things, The things by god, who made this world with puprose..."

To be continued, depends on you guys...

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Re: My first poem. Don't laugh!

Post by ultralala » November 1st, 2010, 4:46 pm

dont know any poem except german ones. +1 for the first poem here :P
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Re: My first poem. Don't laugh!

Post by F |Madness| U » November 1st, 2010, 6:15 pm

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Re: My first poem. Don't laugh!

Post by Hoogie » November 1st, 2010, 6:32 pm

Lol'd at baddest. Been a while since i read that.
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Re: My first poem. Don't laugh!

Post by ConnoR » November 1st, 2010, 11:12 pm

Hoogie wrote:Lol'd at baddest. Been a while since i read that.
Because Matty hasnt posted in a while?
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Re: My first poem. Don't laugh!

Post by Infinite » November 1st, 2010, 11:23 pm

ConnoR wrote:
Hoogie wrote:Lol'd at baddest. Been a while since i read that.
Because Matty hasnt posted in a while?
Probably :P
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Re: My first poem. Don't laugh!

Post by Soviet » November 2nd, 2010, 5:06 am

I wasn't going to post here but since it's turned into a Matty hate thread I thought it would only be right to share my approval.

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