Virtual Assassin

[Hoogie]

Dont mind the quality/editing skills to much, im not a good editor xD

[matt101harris]

it was ok . The bits where u wait like 10 secs for some1 to appear, skip it or fast foward it

[Azabael]

I liked it. Cool frags and fun to watch

[Pedsdude]

I thought it was very good for your first movie, congrats A few points:

- Although it looks nice, there's not much point in having the name at the bottom right if it's all kills by the same person (in this case you)
- I wasn't sure about the battery low bit, seemed somewhat pointless personally, and I did actually think the movie had frozen
- You need consistency with the "1 versus x" text bits, I saw I think at least 3 different styles for it!

lol @ paint in the credits

[Azabael]

originality ^^

[Infinite]

editing could have been better (You already know this, according to your first post :S), but it was very nice for a first frag movie. The quality was very nice (did you use just stock settings without changing any dvars?). I believe that Peds was right with the consistency around the 1 V. x parts. I personally liked the battery low part. It was very original and a great way to transition songs. The only thing about it, was that it could have been done a little bit better, but you would probably need to know some decently advanced editing :s.

[[SoE]_Zaitsev]

I liked your movie. Was pretty good. That battery thing was kinda silly but it looked good when you made it start 'lagging'.

[Innkeeper]

nice vid, loved the +10 scope, but as someone said already make sure to speed up blank places in the video or you lose the audience. Also for the 1v5, you need to show the last kill in first person, its the climax of the clip and the ending of that being in only third person was a let down.

[Hoogie]

First thanks to all reactions.

I thought it was very good for your first movie, congrats A few points:

- Although it looks nice, there's not much point in having the name at the bottom right if it's all kills by the same person (in this case you)
- I wasn't sure about the battery low bit, seemed somewhat pointless personally, and I did actually think the movie had frozen
- You need consistency with the "1 versus x" text bits, I saw I think at least 3 different styles for it!

lol @ paint in the credits

-The name at bottom right i had made by Bashy long time ago.
I was gonna make a video with frags from cRoss and Matty aswell in the video. But that didn't really worked out very well
But that was the moment i had that made, also for cross and matty. I thought it would be a waste if i wouldn't use it at all.
-Battery part was to be original and to switch the song, like ppl already said.
-1versus5 someone made for me, the 1v3 i did myself (2 styles).

At 2:00 its also a 1v3 btw, i forgot to put text there xD

But like i said im not a good editor and its my first real fragmovie

[Pedsdude]

-Battery part was to be original and to switch the song, like ppl already said.

I didn't mind it too much in terms of it being original, it just seemed to drag on for too long imo, and at the time it had me thinking "come on, get on with the movie..."