lol did YOU make this map? xD why didn't you tell me, i thought you were just some jumper

good job, man
here's my review:
(sry its not organised, i just write whatever comes into my mind

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level design was really good at some places such as the blood valey, and really bad at others such as big square rooms
the ambient sound was nice and fitted the map
nice story
there were some small bugs such as places where the player can get stuck
i didnt like most of the textures tbh, you could've used some more custom textures imo
also there were very few details (it saves fps, cause the map is long but still it would look better with some details)
i think most parts weren't portalled? or maybe im wrong? i didnt have problems with fps but my pc is good
the lighting was good overall, but it was too dark at some areas (looking good but hard to jump)
at 1 place it was very dark and i had to jump on some boxes textured with the bright red texture - this really hurted my eyes and i had to skip it with noclip
the scripting was advanced (defining custom player variables and the target practice script) nice

some very good new jumps, i really liked the corner jump with an end cap

some not so good new jumps, the rotating room had nice gameplay but the constant rotating hurted my eyes
there are secrets and bonus rooms which is good
are you sure all secrets are possible to get?

i found only 2 and couldnt get the 1
nice idea with the taxi and "some time later"
some jumps were very hard, you could've left them for a hard version maybe but thats not a problem i just had to skip them (that crazy slide down where i have to avoid the obstacles and in the end hard bounce -.- )

very nice effects at some places - the top of the pyramid was awesome, and the end too
thats what i can think of now, i hope i havent forgotten anything important
overall i liked it, i think ppl should try it
