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CODENAME SCREAM - Test Montage -

Post by Scream » May 16th, 2009, 5:52 pm

My test montage, need feed back on good & bad things about it

HD Link =http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4EYpj1mwGK8&fmt=22 (HD READY)



Music Im Still Alive from Mirrors Edge

Feed Back Please ^^&^^
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Post by BlueDamselfly » May 16th, 2009, 5:59 pm

I loved how you changed music to music in intro, nice job.
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Re: CODENAME SCREAM - Test Montage -

Post by Scream » May 16th, 2009, 6:16 pm

Thanks xD, My actual montage coming up has mainly ak74u (my fav gun) a few noscopes and the longest range noscope ever (i think)
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Re: CODENAME SCREAM - Test Montage -

Post by Nightmare » May 16th, 2009, 6:21 pm

The sound changing at the intro felt awkward and out of place. Just didn't come in at the right time.
Not bad video.
Also, what did you do with the song? Sounds like very poor quality.
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Re: CODENAME SCREAM - Test Montage -

Post by Scream » May 16th, 2009, 6:25 pm

I got sent song, and i forgot to mention i rushed this as i was going to comp shop. Uploaded recently (when i got back) due to shop didnt have parts needed >< Have to wait till next saturday><


^^ Anyway Its only a test & i welcome ALL comments/opinions/negatives ^^
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Re: CODENAME SCREAM - Test Montage -

Post by helium » May 16th, 2009, 7:57 pm

that was pretty OK.

the frags were very bad though, especially since they were public TDM and none were impressive. your editing was pretty creative though and im looking forward to see the next montage
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Re: CODENAME SCREAM - Test Montage -

Post by matt101harris » May 16th, 2009, 9:11 pm

yer nice editing and quality, but i agree with helium on the frags :S lol. And try record in SnD. I am trying to start a frag movie, i just cba atm lol :D.
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Re: CODENAME SCREAM - Test Montage -

Post by atze<3 » May 16th, 2009, 9:50 pm

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Re: CODENAME SCREAM - Test Montage -

Post by Scream » May 16th, 2009, 9:52 pm

THANK YOU AZTE I BEEN LOOKING FOR THEM FOR AGES XD

Oh as i said its test to see if border & effects would blend, im guna make a 2nd test then next sunday realease my montage ^^&^^

Thanks again Azte
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Re: CODENAME SCREAM - Test Montage -

Post by Drofder2004 » May 16th, 2009, 10:40 pm

God Awful music. As nightmare put, it was awkward.

If you are going to tr yhte whole "broken music" horror style, there needs to be very sudden high pitched changes.
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Re: CODENAME SCREAM - Test Montage -

Post by Scream » May 16th, 2009, 11:20 pm

Thanks I'll take it into account ^^&^^
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Re: CODENAME SCREAM - Test Montage -

Post by Infinite » May 16th, 2009, 11:53 pm

frags sucked balls (no scopes... really?) but the rest was decent except the "awkward" feeling that nm was talking about :p.
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Post by Pedsdude » May 17th, 2009, 2:16 am

Infinite wrote:frags sucked balls (no scopes... really?) but the rest was decent except the "awkward" feeling that nm was talking about :p.
Completely agree.

1. I hate no scopes, they're terrible. I'd much rather see someone raping in a server than getting lucky shots off.
2. If you do make a no scope movie, don't show yourself consistently failing before your successes.

Agree with others about the music, too. Good song, but doesn't suit the video at all and the changing audio at start is terrible.
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Re: CODENAME SCREAM - Test Montage -

Post by Scream » May 17th, 2009, 10:36 am

This is the feed back needed thanks ^^&^^ i only really wanted to see if my begging intro bit was ideal, ill try n get better sounds for them, as for frags well couldnt really have a test with just intros xD, my 2nd test montage will have SnD kills and 1Ace ^^&^^
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Re: CODENAME SCREAM - Test Montage -

Post by atze<3 » May 17th, 2009, 10:57 am

do me a favour scream... dont call a fragmovie a fucking montage lol :roll:
i think console naabs started calling it montage on youtube.... (noscope montage, sniper montage, eliminator montage, knife montage, ak-74u montage............) awful

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