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WIP

Posted: March 22nd, 2006, 6:12 pm
by JammY
C&C please. i dont know what colours to do it so feel free to say!!

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v233/ ... lpaper.jpg

Posted: March 22nd, 2006, 6:14 pm
by Pedsdude
Looks nice, although imo a bit plain - could do with a bit more colour?

I quite like the font style and colour as it goes well with the background, although maybe the characters could be in jumping poses?

Posted: March 22nd, 2006, 6:16 pm
by JammY
Thx. Any ideas for colours? and i dont have any renders for jumpin poses lol but ill look in my scrreenshot folder to see if i do.

EDIT: No screens of jumping. but ill look around.

Posted: March 22nd, 2006, 6:21 pm
by Pedsdude
Maybe a slight brown tint, like the CJ site background? For some reason I keep thinking a slight blue tint, although I don't think that would look good :P

Get someone to go on a server with you and go spec and take pictures of them in mid-air - that's how I did it ;)

Posted: March 22nd, 2006, 6:24 pm
by JammY
KK. Ill see what the colours look like and ill post.

Edit
Stil no jumpin ss cos i havent had the chance to get on a server so if anyone has any ss that they are happy with me using, please post em.

browny green -
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v233/ ... erbgre.jpg
blue
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v233/ ... erblue.jpg

Posted: March 22nd, 2006, 8:48 pm
by Drofder2004
First of I like the font and brushwork.. but CoD Renders are lame. You need to get some CoD2 ones with DX9 running (I will have a go soon)

The blue tint is definitly the best.

Also, get rid of that lame "camo" skin :P

Posted: March 22nd, 2006, 9:25 pm
by Koekie
the renders on the first one you posted seem a bit overblended

Posted: March 22nd, 2006, 9:32 pm
by Drofder2004
Here you are, 2 american jumping renders from CoD2 with Dx9 and full anti-aliasing. :)

Download

Posted: March 22nd, 2006, 10:29 pm
by JammY
Thanks Drofder trying them out now!

Edit:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v233/ ... uecod2.jpg
Hmmmm, came out a bit small.

Posted: March 22nd, 2006, 10:58 pm
by Nightmare
looks good even tho they look like they are not jumping.

Posted: March 22nd, 2006, 11:36 pm
by Pedsdude
The right hand image doesn't blend in well imo.

Posted: March 23rd, 2006, 1:34 am
by Drofder2004
You need to use a different method of blending. The renders just dont work with the background. Maybe try an overlay style (where the background is seen over the top of the renders)...

Posted: March 23rd, 2006, 3:22 am
by Soviet
yes, the blending is bad, but otherwise it is good. Perhaps do something as drofder said, or maybe make your renders grayscale, then press control+b and make them the same color as the background - i found out it helps renders fit in a lot better in some of my work.

Posted: March 23rd, 2006, 6:34 pm
by JammY
Ahah I thik it looks much better now, thanks guys for the feedback. Hope you like it.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v233/ ... 1cb742.jpg

Posted: March 23rd, 2006, 9:27 pm
by Pedsdude
Much better.