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a banner please c&c

Posted: March 19th, 2006, 1:41 pm
by waywaaaard
hi i made a banner for my project its for serials

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i would like to hear c&c

Posted: March 19th, 2006, 2:09 pm
by Koekie
serials as in illegal?

Posted: March 19th, 2006, 3:19 pm
by Soviet
looks good. only things i would do to it is add a border (just a 1px black border would do fine) and make all the text match (smaller has outer glow, larger has stroke/perhaps different colored outer glow)

Posted: March 19th, 2006, 3:36 pm
by Nightmare
looks really nice, Soviets right about the border, it would look really nice with one

Posted: March 19th, 2006, 3:44 pm
by waywaaaard
ok i will improve it no not illegal ;-)

thanx for posts

Posted: March 20th, 2006, 10:16 am
by Drofder2004
Lev!athan wrote:no not illegal ;-)
I believe you :P

Text imo is lame, rest is good (add border as soviet said)

Posted: March 21st, 2006, 8:41 pm
by Pedsdude
It's not very easy to see the "Serials at any time" text, other than that it's fine (apart from not having a border, as Soviet pointed out).

Posted: March 22nd, 2006, 6:22 pm
by waywaaaard
added border and hope i made the smaller text better to read

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ok had to make the lights red 'cause it fits better to the rest of the graphics in the programm if u wanna see a screeny just say sth.

mfg

Posted: March 22nd, 2006, 6:24 pm
by Pedsdude
Looks better than before, that's for sure. I still think the "Serials at any time" text is slightly hard to read, although other than that I have no criticisms :)

Posted: March 22nd, 2006, 8:44 pm
by Drofder2004
All good except the "Serials at any time".

My recommendation...

Put them as a normal phrase, no over the top spacing or break, just simply "Serials at any time."
Then remove the outer glow, as the background does not mix well with glows.
Then add a 1 pixel black stroke to the text.

This is a quick knock up (it very badly edited due to time and ability :P). Without the originals, it was hard, but this is roughly how I would have it...
The area inside the red box would have lighting, but I couldnt be bothered attempting to add it again :P
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As you can also see, I have brushed over it using the "Burn tool" to make the image a lot darker (yours was a little to light for me ;))