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I need serious criticism please as it is my first try with 3D Programms ^^

I really like it! Seems like im the only one who cant get a grasp on 3d programs.

First off its really cool BUT i cant tell wtf it says. Edit: just occurred to me maybe it doesn't say anything, idk if it's supposed to.
and maybe the lighting could be a little more even? seems like the far side is a lot darker than the front.

its wildstyle grafitty, just some random letters ^^
ye need to see what i can do with the lightning =)

Looks pretty cool, I have to say.

Change your light setup, cause your text isn't straight you can't have lighting straight in front of it (see the white spots on the right side and the dark parts at the left, it's because the right side is closer to the lighting). Also add a plane on every side and put like 80% reflection on it.

Light source is coming from above, yet reflection is shining towards screen. Design is good, lighting is poor.