mp_bouncer_training2 ?

[A5H73Y]

Hey guys ive just started a new map, it takes inspiration from the original mp_bouncer_training.
I thought its the most simple, but effective jump styled map that pleases most people.
Here's a preview so far:
http://www.mediafire.com/?cipnarwfz62obch
Can you give me some tips on how i should change, remove or add anything please
Also should i keep the name mp_bouncer_training2 ? :L

[Badeendnl]

I think you should change the mapname, because you aren't the author of mp_bouncer_training

[A5H73Y]

I agree, have you actually played the map?

[Goro92]

i played the map..

there is no skybox
you can skip 90% of the bounces with an easy rpg strafe
with an easy bounce - just 125+rpg - you can go on the top of the map

only a question...mapping time?20 minutes?really..

[A5H73Y]

I have literally no where near finished.
I will fix the glitches and cheats out at a later time.
Is the jump style okay? and do things look good (theme)?
Ive set it up the same as the original, start off dead easy then get gradually harder.

[Goro92]

I have literally no where near finished.

i can see that it's not finished ... just 10 bounces

Is the jump style okay? and do things look good (theme)?

in my opinion it's a bit dark and i don't like the black & yellow texture..but hey this is your map, so just do what you want

suggestions:

-add a skybox
-use caulk texture
-if you want to make a "training map", make it wider

[Pedsdude]

I'll test it when you've got a more developed version

[Badeendnl]

Add me on xfire, I'm willing to test it set it up on my private server so I can show you improvments/things you must change to make it more fun

My xfire is badeendnl123

[A5H73Y]

Thanks for the feedback guys, i shall persue the development of this map moreso now that i have a reason to.
I shall keep you updated on the progression as i go on

[Pedsdude]

I would recommend posting screenshots and/or videos as well in future - many people simply won't have time or enough interest to download the map to test it.